My brother, Danielle, who is currently a Management with Honors freshie student at Ateneo, recently wrote an essay for his Eng11 class. Prior to writing it, my brother asked me for help on it since I have more experience (I was a writer and an editor for our school paper when I was in high school. I also worked as an ESL instructor for Japanese for almost a year.) and I'm a level ahead of him when it comes to written works. And so he told me all his ideas - from how he visualizes the scenes in his essay would be to how he would end it. I was already impressed by then. I was supposed to help him, but I wasn't able to. And I'm glad I didn't because he managed to create an awesome one on his own. I'm just so proud of him. :)
WARNING: It's kind of long because the requirement was 1000 - 1, 500 words. And some parts were kind of exaggerated. Haha. :) -----
The ‘Bus’ of Both Worlds
by Danielle C. Royon
When most
people would remember their memorable experiences in life, they certainly
wouldn’t think of a bus. As most of us perceive, buses are not much attractive.
They are usually dismissed after the first glance or not regarded. After all, every
structure of it from the inside to the outside is almost all the same as
another: the narrow aisle down the
middle, rows and rows of seats from the front to the back, the luggage
compartments above, and the large glass windows surrounding the bus. In many
ways, buses can be closely related to the city like, for this instance, Manila.
However, buses share to us a slice of the city once you ride on them. The way
it feels inside the bus, the people who commonly ride it, the system that it
imposes to the people and other inevitable experiences in the bus actually more
or less reflect living in Manila.
For me, as a student, the bus plays a big role in my
journey. My hometown is in the province but I currently study in the city,
specifically in Quezon City. I grew up in the rural setting so it was quite
hard for me to instantly adjust to a whole new world. During the weekdays, I stay
at a dorm, which is now my second home but I always make sure that I go home to
Laguna on weekends. Since my parents are busy with their jobs, the only way for
me to be able to go home is to commute—and part of the task is to ride a bus. Another
weekend marks another bus trip for me. I am now heading to Cubao to wait for
the bus going to Laguna. As I patiently wait in the busy and noisy streets of
EDSA, I notice that people are in a rush to findthe right bus for their trip. For
some reason, they are always in a hurry. City life really is fast-paced. If you
live in a city, you must follow and go along its continual, fast flow. In
Manila, as other people are catching the next bus, trying not to be late for
work, preventing to line up for a long time, and avoiding tremendous traffic on
the road, you surely wouldn’t want to mess with them and their schedule; thus,
you barely notice that you are living your life in a fast-paced manner as well.
The city has an invisible hand that pushes you forward in order for you to
survive. It is very unlike in the province where you have more time to focus on
what you are doing and all the people are willing to extend their moral support
and help for you to finish it. You mostly have free space and free time to do
whatever you like.
A bus going
to Pacita is now approaching. To have a fairly nice seat, I hurried and fall in
sync with the other busy bus catchers. I entered the bus, and I immediately
notice three key people inside it: the driver, the conductor, and the
passengers. The conductor acts as a herald who announces the route of the bus
to the eagerly waiting commuters in EDSA. He will not stop convincing you until
you finally choose to ride on his bus. Even if he doesn’t know you, he surprisingly
seems to distinguish where you are heading. Near the stairs leading to the bus,
I spotted the driver. He greets me with a warm smile. As a result, I feel
welcome inside his bus. The smile of a driver is an assurance that you’ve
chosen the right bus; there are some bus drivers who aren’t really concerned
about their passengers. They just bring the bus to its destination and that’s
it. A warm smile indicates that the driver will ensure that you will arrive at
your desired stop safely.
I now traverse
the narrow and dark aisle in the middle of the bus and as I look for a vacant
seat, I can see the eyes of the passengers staring and carefully watching every
move I make. They look at me suspiciously and try to determine whether I will
sit beside them or not. We do not know each other but there is one thing common
in all of us—we’re all riding the same bus. Life in the city offers a sense of
adventure and challenge. Like the conductor, there is an invitation that tempts
you to try living in the city, but after you have accepted that invitation, you
are totally on your own. You are in a world where nobody knows you and it’s up
to you if you want to introduce yourself or not. There is a great sense of
anonymity because you have many people around you, yet you can’t name even one
of them. But above all of these fears and uncertainty is the trust that you manifest
by riding the bus. You are not sure whether the people around you is safe to
ride with and whether the driver can drive you home alive but you have the
faith that everything will flow smoothly. This is the same way we live in the
city. We invest trust to things and people unknown. But ironically, those
strangers are the ones molding our personality. They shape us in the way they
live their life also in the city. Whether we admit it or not, they contribute to
our being and are part of our daily life, as well as the driver and the
conductor.
Now that
I’ve found my seat, I can now rest and wait for the bus to move. I feel confined
in a very little space so to divert my attention, I take in the panoramic vista
outside the bus. Since the journey is always long, to avoid getting bored I
curiously observe what is outside the frames and finally realize the big
difference between the city and the province. As we travel along EDSA, I
observe that the space in the city is very limited. Buildings of different
heights are scattered in the city. The streets are filled to the brim and
sometimes the market present in the streets even extends up to the road. I can
see houses, mostly in the slums, very close to each other. Pollution, in all of
its kind, is predominant. Structures and buildings located along the streets of
the Manila resemble mountain ranges that exhibit certain unifying features like
age, position, size and purpose. It seems that one building influences another,
as everything stretches along EDSA.
We are now
travelling across the bridge that would lead us to SLEX or the South Luzon
Expressway. Here is where the city meets the province. It serves as a smooth
transition as it combines the features of the city and the province. Like the
city, SLEX has wide roads that can accommodate large traffic. You can still see
buildings and a little bit of the slums, but this time, you will see them along
with fields of croplands or grasslands. It is a place where balance between the
city and the province can be seen. After
the long yet fast journey along the SLEX, we are now approaching Laguna. As we
exit the toll, I also bid goodbye to heavy traffic, pollution, buildings and
turmoil that can mostly be found in the city. Houses are far from each other
and there is a vast land of greeneries. The narrow road is not anymore filled
with smoke and cars but with livestock. Of course, there are also carabaos and horses, pulling carts with
rural goods in them. People are now in what I call the normal pace of life.
Families are working together for their livelihood; thus, providing more time
and energy spent with the family. I can see children playing along the road and
they are enjoying the clean and fresh surrounding that serves as their big
playground. Everything else seems to be fine.
Truly, the
province and the city cannot be interchanged. The rural and urban lifestyles
are two options from which you can choose how to live. After everything, the
two serve different but relatively unique, important roles in humanity. The bus
plays a crucially big role of delivering the people to and from each distinct
world. It acts as a medium of two different domains. It also serendipitously acts
as a venue for discovery and reflection. Finally, as I step down the stairs of
the bus, after just a few minutes of leaving the bustling city, I smell the
fresh air and see my family waving at me from a distance. At last, I am
home.
(Words: 1454)
The title is based from the
song of Miley Cyrus, “The Best of Both Worlds.”
----- So that was my brother's essay. I posted it with permission from him, of course. How good was that, huh? And oh, can you pretty please show my brother some love and comment or message me your suggestions and what you can say about it? I'm sure he'd appreciate it a lot! Thanks in advance. :) Till next time. God bless and bless God! - Princess HCR. ♥ P.S. Hope he gets an A on it. Please pray for it. He's aiming to maintain his high QPI. :) |